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Why do you do it? You don’t know why, but you do. You make sure the windows are locked, you check the other side of the door, and your closet…You even check under your bed. Why do you do this? Does ripping open the shower curtain and seeing nothing there make you feel safe? Does scoping the area with your eyes after reading a scary story reassure you?

Well, it shouldn’t.

Because by the time you’ve looked, I’ve already hidden.

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CommanderMeouch
7 years ago

Hot diggity that was creepy and I did not like it! Haha. I do ALL of those things (especially the shower curtain!) I do not want to think there is something there just hidden!! Very well done. I can relate it to and that’s scary

Potato
Potato
7 years ago

It’s not like I actually like to sleep at night nope nope nope I like staying awake praying to God to have mercy on my soul.

Sleep is for the weak ;-; plz help meh

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WeirdHorror
7 years ago

Who needs sleep, amiright?
8/10

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Chaseti127
7 years ago

Love ❤️ it!!!;)

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ooooookkkkkkkaaaaayyyyyyy…..I always wondered what was in my attic anyway

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AWildCasy3
7 years ago

Short but relatable. The doggo approves.

Hufftimber
Hufftimber
7 years ago

Well, it’s not bad but it’s too short to be creepy

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1encoded1
7 years ago

Short and sweet

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LolerioNark
7 years ago

I always love short pastas that explain a scenario that you are very familiar with that involves being creeped out by something specific like a fear or a monster and it’s just the narrator talking about that specific thing but it ends with the narrator telling that they are that specific thing.

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Omfi
7 years ago

Too short

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Missusstef
7 years ago

This is the first Tiny story I’ve read on Creepypasta, very good considering it’s creepy and only a paragraph.

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ab107604
7 years ago

makes me think if that is what the shadows i see are. amazing.

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Ugavemethecreeps
7 years ago

O)_(O

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iMeloyNyan
7 years ago

Too slow to look. They’ve already hidden.

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mmf9194
8 years ago

Short done right

X

I don’t need sleep anyway

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SarahChambers
8 years ago

Haha brilliant!

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Crystal07
8 years ago

Well, I wasn’t planning on sleeping tonight anyway.

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MetallicaFan
8 years ago

I like it! 🙂
Great Job! 😀
5/5

funnymouth666
funnymouth666
8 years ago

Very tasty pasta.