A cry woke me in the middle of the night. It’s as if a girl was trying hard to muffle her desperate cries of help so as to keep something from hearing her. My heart started to pound with fear as I was reminded of some scenes from horror films involving creepy, crying ghost girls. I badly wanted to wake my room mate who was sleeping across my bed but it is impossible to wake her up for she is such a heavy sleeper.
I didn’t dare open my eyes. I’ve heard some creepy stories about our dormitory but I don’t want them to experience first hand. So like a frightened child I hastily covered myself with my blanket and turned to face the wall. Ignoring the cries, I willed my scared self to get some sleep.
I woke up from an uneasy sleep the next day to see my room mate with a strange, frightened expression on her face.
“So you heard it too?” I hastily asked. “That creepy crying sounded horrible! I wasn’t able to sleep properly last night!”
With a haunted voice, she replied, “Th-that was me who was crying when I saw you levitating from your bed.”
wow that’s weird
well actually Th3Fall3nAng3l5 he didn’t say that he made it, he just doesn’t know who did. BTW great story
Wow O-O i wasn’t expecting that. Great story. Gave me goosebumps.
I’m a wizard!!!!
Loved it but why didn’t she feel it lifting it her up and how did she see her getting lifted up if she was such a heavy sleeper?;)
I’ve heard a story similar to this. Maybe if you had changed the ending to something more believable. As a previous user had noted, there’s no way she wouldn’t have noticed that she wasn’t laying on the bed. It could have had maybe a spirit or maybe even blood covered walls (although cliché, it might have had more of an affect) Over all, it isn’t the worst story I’ve read.
Loved it 10/10
Mindfuck to the MAX!
i would advise being a little more descriptive. I would love to hear more of ur work! Love it! 🙂
At least its original
Mind officially blown. Kinda reminds me of Ghostbusters, when the chick is levitating over the bed.
Ehh.. That was just random.
1/5
Oh yay! Another plagiarist! Write your own story or don’t post. You’re lucky I’m not going to report you.
I actually like how the twist went. Here are just the things I thought after reading:
Realizing that the girl just somehow indirectly told her roommate, “You’re crying is creepy and horrible!” was a bit of a mood-breaker, even almost funny.
I’m wondering how she didn’t realize she wasn’t touching the bed with her back and even when she turned to her side.
Still, I appreciate shorts with twists that go like this.
I loved it! Hit me good at the end! ~taco
I love the twist
hahaha : D got me good, real nice
what the…
not very good..i didn’t like the ending
The only crying in this story was me when I read how bad it was.