There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning.
As he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.
The next morning, the hunter awoke — he turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.
Wow. Stalker Level:90000
WOW . . .
No words, just WOW . . .
Good Job! Keep up the good work! 10/10
Wicked to the power of Wicked!
God Damn Wonderful
Nothing special…
Short and sweet pasta. 5/5.
Short, elegant, complete and disturbing.
I think the hunter needs medical help
Wow. That was a solid short story! Well done
900/10
That was scary!
i remember going on a retreat with my friends and telling this story myself. Defo a classic for me. Loved it. 5/5! Love it! 😀
That was twisted. Good job. I like it.
I thought it was something like mona lisa. LOL. I like the concept though, sent chills.
Holy Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!!!! 🙂
5/5 😀
This pasta was truly incredible and accomplished what few pastas could on this website. It gave a detailed story within a few paragraphs and packing quite the scare at the same time. The twist was somewhat unexpected, but still turned out great.
Holy shit. Chills.
Well done, my good sir “Unknown”.
Just reminds me of a Foreigner song (Long, Long Way From Home)
It was my destiny
It’s what we needed to do
They were telling me
I’m telling you
I was inside looking outside
The millions of faces
But still I’m alone
Waiting, hours of waiting
Paying a penance
I was longing for home
Beautifully written and wonderfully creepy.
5/5.
Keep writing these mind**** stories.