I sat down with my bowl of popcorn, drenched in butter, just the way I liked it. I picked up the TV remote and flipped throught the channels. It was the same old stuff as always, advertising for the newest toys, or soap operas about Italian families who never get along. I stopped at the news channel.
“There have been reports of an escape from the Rockfield Prison. A man, who murdered 37 people, including three police officers, was reported missing from the prison today. He was last seen by inmates yesterday night at around 9:40. It is still uncertain if he escaped, or if he’s been killed and hidden by enemies in the prison, although another guard was found dead this morning near his cell.”
I got up from my chair and walked to the kitchen. It had been months since I last had popcorn. I had forgotten how much butter to put in. Hadn’t put enough. I put it down because I had a sudden urge to pee. After using the restroom, I walked outside and got in the police cruiser. I roamed around the neighborhood until I found a house with no cars, but lights inside.
I parked the car on the road and got out. I walked to the back of the house, and through the window saw a light. I could see someone on a computer, on a website with a black background, and red logos everywhere. As I was walking to the window, I looked down at my right arm.
The orange jumpsuit was bloodstained up and down the arms, and some was on my chest too. I decided to keep it that way, better to surprise this victim.
Check out my version of this story here:
https://youtu.be/u3mGph-p4GY
The read wasn’t that great to be honest, I didn’t find it very enjoyable. It didn’t feel scary, I could tell from the start how they acted that it was them. It didn’t seem creepy, it felt like just some story.
also how did creepa99 get 101 dislikes, is it because of his username, I know thats hwy disliked, screw minecraft
for everyone who doesnt get it its about you reading this (black backround and red labels, hint hint) nad him stalking you closely.
[spoiler]he was the perp[/spoiler] But to be completely honest it wasn’t that great of a story. I see room for improvement. Good luck in your next creepy pastas. 🙂
Predictable, yes, but i still liked it
I think he would be already dead if he killed that many people.
Predictable, but okay
So he just ditches his popcorn/Netflix time to stalk/scare/murder someone reading this website?
This one was building up great suspense (for me), until he said “It had been months since I last had popcorn”, which completely gave away that he was the escaped criminal.
Was very short and Not very good.
This was totally uter crappy plz try aigan
Spoiler Alert: [spoiler]This story isn’t a mindfuck at all[/spoiler]
Woooooooooow, the protagonist was the killer. Tbh, didn’t see that coming. The “i” thing got a little annoying but it was still a good pasta. I give it 7 out of 10[spoiler][/spoiler]
Sorry, dude. Your creepypasta is not complete. It’s not even scary. Please improve your pasta.
21/100. Really Sorry. It needs to improve.
But don’t worry. If it’s your first creepypasta, there might be more opportunities. So use them to the fullest. Wishing you all the best for your future creepypastas.
Hah! I’m at church on my phone right now! Can’t fool me!
Well I know my Pastas are crappy but this was just special
[spoiler he's the killer]
Would be so much better in present tense.. And I’m reading this in class.
Liking butter so much makes him less scary.