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Dancing Shadows

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Dancing Shadows

I look into the night,
And I know I’m in a trance,
As my head turns to the right,
I see the shadows dance.

The voices keep on saying,
Do it, do it, die,
I feel my skull expanding,
At least I have to try.

I can’t take all the screaming,
On the balcony I kneel,
I feel like I am dreaming,
But no dream is this real

I jump towards my death,
I watch the ground get closer,
As my bones rip through my flesh,
I know my life is over…

Now you’ve read my story,
Look out the corner of your eye,
I’m screaming at you hoarsely,
Do it, Do it, DIE!

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BubblyShip
6 years ago

Just listening to the muffin song by Tomska while reading the last line, anyone else?

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DeathSpamZ
6 years ago

Can someone die, please, because I’ve been screaming this poem on my balcony for the last hour and nobody from the other apartments have commited suicide yet.

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FreekyPotato
6 years ago

Nice Chorus “Do it, do it, DIE”
One to be remembered
Nice to see a creepy pasta in poem form

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Jeff
6 years ago

wow
i loved it
do it do it die

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FlareArrowwood
6 years ago

I already hear voices…
One of the stronger ones tells me I’m pathetic, useless, and a lot of other stuff Lilongwe those lines

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WeepingAngel143
6 years ago

do it. do it. DIE
yeah same

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TheMadGamer
7 years ago

Sounds like a song I heard once.

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LolerioNark
7 years ago

Very creepy! It gave me flashbacks of this time I hallucinated while looking out my window (Not fun times but I love this poem anyways)

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Manila_Rice
7 years ago

Love this story and chillingly poetic style. I hope to see more of your works in the future!

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Nightmarrionne
7 years ago

This wasn’t the creepiest, but it’s nice to see a poem occasionally.

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ricardortega00
7 years ago

I like that it is a poem.

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stitches15
7 years ago

Wow, that was the first poem I’ve seen on here, I feel like it was quite descriptive. 10\10!

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Eminems
7 years ago

People who say they don’t understand this poem, they really don’t know the emotion of poems or writing that goes into short poems like this. For me, this poem was powerful and sad, as well as the creepy-factor you need for a creepy pasta. Great work! Please write more

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iMeloyNyan
7 years ago

Nice take on poetry.. A creepy one indeed. Just do it!

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batman4401
8 years ago

Your poem sent a chill up my spine, I loved it.

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Fujoshi
8 years ago

Same.

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Who_needs_sleep
8 years ago

This one just made me sad. 🙁 didn’t really scare me that much cuz I’m used to hearing voices now, but the voices don’t tell me to commit suicide.

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TheMoonborn52
8 years ago

Normally people who try to write poem pastas end up failing, but this is amazing. Not too scary, though.

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LiliththeDollmaker
8 years ago

This is great, short and sad

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Awesome!!!!